来自鹤壁文学翻译的7大准则,教你快速提高英语作文

翻译资讯    发布时间:2018/5/28 9:43:00

英语作文,在整个英语考试中占据着很大的比分,想要英语考得高分,英语作文是一定要写的非常优秀,首先词汇语法不能出错,还有就是不能千篇一律,这样的话给阅卷老师看时才能赢得高分。

好的英语作文在给阅卷老师看时,就要留下一个好的印象,卷面整洁是其一,卷面内容是其二。卷面内容就是高分的保障了,如何把内容写好,就是如何把英语作文写好了,关于英语作文,鹤壁翻译公司的英语翻译、图书翻译、文学翻译是最清楚的。


好的英语作文要坚持两个原则:

Informative:信息量丰富——要点全部覆盖、且在细节上有适度的发挥;

Economical:经济的——即用词简约,不为凑字数而使用冗余的词和结构。

1.用介词词组和副词状语丰富句子信息

We held a meeting.——

We held a meeting in our classroomafterschool.(添加时间和地点状语,使之更具画面感)

2.主题句先行原则、且主题句至少包含SVA三要素;

With pressure, we know what to do and howto achieve our goals. Without pressure, we are just like a child having no ideaof responsibility.——

Peoplealways believe that where there is pressure, there is motivation.With pressure, we know what to do and how to achieve our goals.Without pressure, we are just like a child having no idea of responsibility.(用Where there is…there is…这句先行概括pressure的作用。)


3.描述时如使用形容词,则用具体行为动词句子支撑;

It is sunny and the fields are beautiful inspring. ——

It is sunny and the countryside isbeautiful in spring. The field iscovered with green trees and colorful flowers.(用is covered with…支撑beautiful)

4.使用It/There、倒装、状语前置等句型变换主语;

I hesitatedat first and didn’t believe I could do it well. But I said yes at last becauseI wanted to try something new. ——
AtfirstI felt so crazy and didn’t believe I could doit well. But I said yes at last because, anyway,it was interesting to try something new.(改变成分顺序,突出部分信息;使用it句式,使句子开头富于变化。)

5.使用复合句(如宾语从句、定语从句等)以减少相同词语的重复;

Mr. Lee had his own ways to make hislessons lively. His lessons left us deep impression.——

Mr. Lee had his own ways to make hislessons lively, which left us deep impression.(使用定语从句,代替his lessons的重复,表达了相同意思)

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6.恰当的使用被动语态,以突出特定对象;

People are destroying our environment. Theycut down trees and pour so much waste into rivers. ——
Our environment is being destroyed. Trees arecut down and so much waste is poured into rivers.(主语改为environment,trees,waste,更有画面感、显得触目惊心。)

7.恰当地使用动词非谓语形式、以达到简约。

Some people are not confident. They feel ithard to express their ideas properly. They believe that no one lovesthem. ——
Some people are not confident, feeling it hardto express their ideas properly and believing that no one loves them.(来源:独佳英语)

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